Eenzaamheid is iets universeels, du

Eenzaamheid is iets universeels, dus het betreft alle mensen waar ook. Aan de andere kant lijkt het ook op een SF-story met de pillen tegen low self esteem. Maar later blijken dat plotseling placebo's te zijn. De handeling maakt ook grote sprongen door de tijd, soms te groot om geloofwaardig te zijn. De confrontatie tussen de twee opposing characters is niet erg overtuigend. Ik had steeds het gevoel een toneelstuk te zien, met slechte spelers. Het is allemaal te melodramatisch voor mij en de oplossing van het conflict is ook niet overtuigend. Haar zuster, we konden dat al van een mijl af raden. Ik denk dat je de cardinale fout hebt gemaakt om de lezer te laten denken, dat low self esteem en ego al bij de geboorte aanwezig zouden zijn; het zijn echter omgevingsfactoren, die deze vormen bij ieder van ons ontwikkelen in sterkere of zwakkere mate. Het gevoel waardeloos te zijn of juist over zeker blijkt in de situaties die je geschetst hebt niet de oorzaak maar het gevolg ervan te zijn.

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Loneliness is universal, so it concerns all people anywhere else. On the other hand it also seems on an SF story with the pills against low self esteem. But later turn out that suddenly placebos. The Act also makes great leaps through time, sometimes too large to be credible. The confrontation between the two opposing characters is not very convincing. I always had the feeling to see a play, with bad players. It's all too melodramatic for me and the solution of the conflict is also unconvincing. Her sister, we could guess all that from a mile off. I think you have made the cardinale error the reader into thinking, that low self esteem and ego already present at birth; However, the environmental factors, which these forms at each of us develop in stronger or weaker degree. Feeling worthless or correct about definitely evidenced in the situations you have outlined not the cause but the consequence of it.

Resultaten (Engels) 2:

Loneliness is something universal, so it applies to all people everywhere. On the other hand it also looks like a science fiction story with the pills from low self esteem. But later found that to be suddenly placebos. The act also makes great leaps through time, sometimes too large to be credible. The confrontation between the two opposing characters is not very convincing. I always had the feeling to see a play with bad players. It is all too melodramatic for me and the resolution of the conflict is also not convincing. Her sister, we could guess from a mile. I think you made the cardinal mistake to let the reader think that low self esteem and ego were already present at birth; However, its environment, developing these forms to each of us stronger or weaker degree.

Resultaten (Engels) 3:

loneliness is universal, so it is all the people. on the other hand, it is also a science fiction story with the pills with low self esteem. but later that placebos to appear suddenly. the act also makes big jumps in time, sometimes too big to be credible. the confrontation between the two opposing characters is not very convincing. i still feel bad to see a play, with players. it's all too melodramatic for me and the solution of the conflict is not convincing. her sister, we could guess that a mile off. i think you made the wrong cardinale the reader to think, low self esteem and ego at birth would be present; however, these factors, which are each of us in developing stronger or weaker degree. the feeling to be worthless or on certain shows in the situations you have described is not the cause but the result to be.