She has two inner voices; that's quite difficult to keep apart. On the other hand, it is nice when those two would come into conflict with each other, because she clearly has difficulties to take a stand. She wants to maintain that child now or not? Perhaps you should make that much clearer.She clearly has trouble with authority. What happened which makes them so it has become? They blame the old doctor something, then I would sure like to know what exactly that. She is afraid that she will go dead? Maybe it will be clear that in the second part, because you're talking to in the introduction about a near death experience.
Wordt vertaald, even geduld aub..