Waarom maakt hij de omweg via Dr. H

Waarom maakt hij de omweg via Dr. Himmelfarb om Mrs. Fletcher's bloed te kunnen zuigen? Waarom is hij eigenlijk een vampier? Weet hij het zelf niet en lijdt hij ook aan Destinatia? Het lijkt erop dat je allemaal vragen opwerpt, die niet beantwoord worden in het verhaal. De lezer blijft met de raadsels zitten en dat is wat onbevredigend. Het zou prettig zijn als er meer structuur in het verhaal zou zitten. Een kliniek in New York op dat punt in de stad lijkt me wat onwaarschijnlijk, maar je kunt wellicht een goede reden bedenken. Wat is Simon's relatie met zijn vrouw? Is zij de reden van zijn vampierschap? Je wekt de indruk, dat Dr. Himmelfarb ook een vampier is, maar er blijkt nergens, dat het ook zo is. Waarom zou hij hem anders een gunst moeten verlenen?

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Why he makes the detour via Dr. Himmelfarb to Mrs. Fletcher's blood to be able to suck? Why is he actually a vampire? Does he know it myself and he also suffers to Destinatia? It seems that you all raises questions, that are not answered in the story. The reader stays with the riddles are and that's what unsatisfactory. It would be nice if more structure in the story would be. A clinic in New York on that point in the city seems to me which is unlikely, but you can possibly have a good reason. What is Simon's relationship with his wife? She is the reason of his vampierschap? You creates the impression, that Dr. Himmelfarb also a vampire, but there appears to be nowhere, that it is so. Why would he have to grant a favor him otherwise?

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Why he makes the detour Dr. Himmelfarb to Mrs. Fletcher's to suck blood? Why is he really a vampire? He does not know himself and he also suffers from Destinatia? It seems that you all raises questions that are not answered in the story. The reader is left with the puzzles and that's what unsatisfactory. It would be nice if more structure would be in the story. A clinic in New York at that point in the city seems a bit unlikely, but you can probably think of a good reason. What is Simon's relationship with his wife? Is she the reason for his vampire shelf? You give the impression that Dr. Himmelfarb is also a vampire, but there is no evidence that it is so. Why would it otherwise be a favor?

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why is he the detour through dr. himmelfarb for mrs. fletcher's blood to suck? why he is actually a vampire? he doesn't know it, and he is also destinatia? it seems that you all issues, not be answered in the story. the reader with the riddles and is unsatisfactory. it would be nice if more structure in the story. a clinic in new york at that point in the city seems unlikely, but perhaps you can think of a good reason. what is simon's relationship with his wife? it is the reason of his vampierschap? you give the impression that dr. himmelfarb also is a vampire, but there's no evidence that it is. why else would he should give him a favor?