Maar het is tamelijk onbegrijpelijk

Maar het is tamelijk onbegrijpelijk, waarom hij besluit het huis van de homo man te verlaten. Was dat omdat hij het zich niet kon voorstellen, dat de homo zou toekijken? Geloofde hij niet, dat hij naar Mandy ging en in plaats daarvan een paar andere homo's zou halen? Is dit een verkapt soort homo haat? Het is niet duidelijk, wat je hiermee wilde doen.

Een verderfelijke moraal is interessant om te beschrijven. Maar je zou er meer elementen in moeten brengen, die dat gedrag veroorzaken. Je hoeft het niet te veroordelen, maar er zou iets moeten gebeuren, dat een twist aan het verhaal geeft.

die nogal rolbevestigend beschreven is.

Resultaten (Engels) 1:

But it's fairly incomprehensible, why he decides to leave the House of the gay man. Was that because he could not imagine, that the gay would watch? He believed not, that he went to Mandy and instead a few other gays would pick up? Is this a covert type of homophobia? It is not clear, what you wanted to do.A pernicious moral is interesting to describe. But you would have to bring more elements in there, those that cause behavior. You don't have to condemn the world, but there should be something happen, that a twist to the story.which is rather rolbevestigend.

Resultaten (Engels) 2:

But it is quite incomprehensible why he decides to leave the home of the gay man. It was because he could not imagine that would stand the gay? He did not believe that he went to Mandy and instead would get a couple of other gay people? Is this a kind of disguised gay hate? It is not clear what you wanted to do this.

A pernicious moral is interesting to describe. But you would have to bring in more elements that cause this behavior. You do not have to condemn it, but something should be done, which gives a twist to the story.

Described quite rolbevestigend.

Resultaten (Engels) 3:

but it"s quite incomprehensible, why he decides to leave the house of gay man. that was because he couldn"t imagine that the gay would watch? he did not believe that he went instead to mandy and a few other gay men would get? this is a disguised form of gay hate? it is not clear what you wanted to do this.a pestilent morals is interesting to describe. but you would need to bring in more elements, that behavior. you don"t have to pay, but there was something should happen, a twist to the story.which kind of role confirming is described.